The King of the Birds

PreS-Gr 2—Flannery enjoys 15 minutes of fame after she teaches her chicken to walk backward and a journalist from New York covers the story. In an attempt to maintain the heightened barnyard mood, the girl adds more birds to her collection. When that effort fails, she purchases a peacock and puts him in charge. Despite attempts to cajole the "king" into displaying his tail—she throws a party, feeds him flowers, and leads a parade—he refuses to oblige. Softly textured tan pages provide a warm backdrop for Nelson's digitally composed scenes, in which black-and-white landscape photographs contrast with the colorful fowl created from painted paper. Deadpan expressions on the birds match the understated storytelling. When a solution presents itself in the form of a peahen and the peacock finally fans his tail, "the queen look[s] down at the ground, interested in some rocks that [are] there." An author's note reveals that the germ of this tale was drawn from the childhood of writer Flannery O'Connor, who later in life also raised peacocks. While this literary anecdote has charm, the book would benefit from stronger narrative elements. It is not clear until several pages in whether Flannery is the child or the chicken. Two conversations with the boy next door don't contribute much. The excitement that Flannery yearns for feels unattained—perhaps a result of birds and girl always wanting more and the moments themselves being presented in an underwhelming manner.