Gr 5–7—In contemporary Birmingham, Alabama, sixth-grader Nell has been coping with her mother's emotional volatility and neglect, adjusting to a sequence of stepfathers, and having only alternate-weekend contact with her preoccupied dad. Loving grandparents and a best friend have helped, but now she and Lydia are forbidden to see each other because of a disagreement between their mothers. Nell convinces Lydia to deceive their parents into thinking they are going to remedial summer school; instead they spend their days at an abandoned golf course, setting up camp inside a huge dinosaur statue on the putt-putt green. But a rift develops between them when they discover a homeless family living at Hole Nine, and Nell is drawn to the mother's kindness and interest in her. Lydia leaves, and when Nell helps a boy during a Fourth of July sparkler fire, she begins to confront the reality of her situation and to recognize the steps she must take to face the challenges of her life. The first-person narrative, if sometimes self-conscious, still effectively conveys a strong sense of place and the conflict of a sympathetic protagonist, but some plot elements strain credibility and most characters are insufficiently developed. Nevertheless, readers will be gratified that Nell's resolve and courage in ultimately standing up for herself result in a hopeful conclusion.—
Marie Orlando, formerly at Suffolk Cooperative Library System, Bellport, NYAn unusual setting—an abandoned golf course—gives this story of two friends’ summer a dreamlike quality. Nell and Lydia’s explorations of mini-golf structures and overgrown greens are akin to visiting an alien landscape. Clear, descriptive writing eloquently depicts the characters’ surroundings and emotions. While out on the links, Nell notes: “When you’re catching a fish every five minutes, fishing is very exciting. Not very challenging, but exciting. There’s a breeze blowing over the water, rays of sun are filtering through the trees, and every so often, a fish gleams silver as it breaks the surface. Lydia laughs every time she gets one on dry land.” Nell and Lydia have subtle, but significant differences in their worldviews—for instance, Lydia is happy to spend her days away from home, but unlike Nell, she would never dream of running away. The friends’ recognition that they don’t always see eye to eye, and may be growing apart, is believable and poignant. Includes a sensitive portrayal of a homeless family’s struggles. Though they’ve found shelter at the golf course, they have difficulty acquiring enough food and are ashamed to disclose their situation to friends.
Nell and Lydia are best friends, both daughters of neglectful, selfish mothers. When they're forbidden to spend time together because their moms have argued, Nell devises a way for them to meet at Lodema, an abandoned golf and mini-golf course. While their mothers think they're at camp and summer school, respectively, the girls move in to the fanciful structures of the mini-golf course, where they explore the pleasures of overgrown fairways and gone-wild ponds. But they aren't the only golf-course dwellers, and as July progresses, Nell's community begins to expand, deepening her freedom from her mother and giving her a clearer sense of self. This is a story of leisurely self-discovery and emotional survival, a serene, thoughtful mix of family difficulties and summer magic. The image of the overgrown golf course as a home to summer campers is tantalizing in itself, all the more so because Nell's sojourn there is trouble-free, even though the home she returns to is not. The characters of the girls' mothers are not well developed (and they are overly susceptible to Nell's forged letters about camp) and Nell herself has a rather mature penchant for self-analysis, but her inner life and questions are at the heart of adolescent growth. deirdre f. baker
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