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Putting Makeup on the Fat Boy

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Gr 8 Up—Carlos Duarte, 16, has tremendous confidence. He does what he does and makes few apologies—and what he does best is makeup. The teen is fearless in his determination to realize his dream of becoming a makeup artist to the stars. His first job is at the FeatureFace counter, the premiere makeup company in Macy's flagship store. He is sure that this job will launch him into the stratosphere of fame, but pride and ambition cause him to take action without considering the consequences. Carlos struggles to develop a sense of accountability, and making his life more difficult are his sister's abusive boyfriend and his own one-sided crush on a boy in school. Readers will simultaneously root for and marvel at this fascinating character, though their support will be tested by his mean-spirited comments. Unfortunately, Carlos tends to overwhelm the plot and the other characters, who fall a little flat in his shadow. It is a relief that Wright does not give the story a tidy ending, opting instead to leave a few strands untied. After all, Carlos still has places to go.—Naphtali L. Faris, Youth Services Consultant, Missouri State Library, Jefferson City, MO
When he starts working at the Macy's cosmetics counter, Carlos thinks his career as a celebrity makeup artist is finally beginning. It is, but he still faces pressures at home (his mother has a temper) and school (he has a crush on a sweet but straight guy). Carlos's snappy, sassy narration is buoyant but honest about the vagaries of real life and fabulousness.
Putting Makeup on the Fat Boy balances the pleasures of a wish fulfillment story line with the heartbreak of serious issues such as homophobia and domestic violence. Carlos worksit. He’s sassy, honest, resourceful, and persistent. Readers will root for him as he learns to navigate the traps laid out by his petty, vengeful boss—the improbably tall, improbably skinny, improbably named Valentino. Carlos is determined to make his mother, who is uncomfortable with his talent, proud of him. In a different character, his tireless ambition and self-confidence could be grating; in Carlos, it seems like a sane coping mechanism for a world that values gender norms to which he can’t conform. Bil Wright has a sly, occasionally dark, sense of humor. When Carlos asks his mother if his father was “really a drunken drug addict,” she asks him if he thinks she’s such a bad mother, she’d “tell her kids their father was a drunken drug addict if it wasn’t true?”

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