FICTION

Jonathan James and the Whatif Monster

illus. by author. 32p. Kane Miller. 2013. Tr $12.99. ISBN 978-1-61067-131-6; pap. $6.99. ISBN 978-1-61067-118-7. LC 2011945335.
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PreS-K—This picture book about a child who conquers his fears barely manages to avoid didacticism. The voice of the Whatif Monster, a small green creature with pointed teeth, fills Jonathan James's head with worry and doubt when he tries something new. "What if it's hard?/What if you're bad?/What if they laugh and/make you feel sad?" The rhyming text scans well at the beginning, but falters and sometimes feels forced as the story comes to a conclusion. Jonathan James questions the Whatif Monster: "And what if baseball is nothing but fun,/and I end up hitting a triple home run?" The bold, color illustrations are flat, and the faces of the children are lifeless. The ending, in which the boy finds a best friend after taking a chance, is satisfying and the lesson is a good one, but the book is too lacking in style and consistent charm to recommend.—Maralita L. Freeny, District of Columbia Public Library

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